My personal thoughts @HTX_Molly If there are any parts that are not well written, I welcome Lord Liu's guidance~

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PerpPessimist
· 19h ago
Sixth Master, please give your comments. I also want to get some valuable insights.
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GateUser-e84f640c
· 20h ago
It reads quite smoothly, at least the logic and attitude are on point. Don't criticize yourself prematurely if there's something wrong.
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On-ChainCatUnderTheMoonlight
· 04-18 10:12
That's very sincere; being willing to share it already shows strength.
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MirrorBallRolling
· 04-18 09:01
I think your phrase "the thoughts in one's mind" adds a lot of points; starting with stance before opinion doesn't come across as forcing a conclusion.
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DeepSeaColdStart
· 04-17 14:22
@HTX_Molly This round is meant as a warm-up to draw out more, and I’m looking forward to Six delivering a high-quality breakdown.
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GlassDome
· 04-17 14:11
How about adding the point you most want to be guided on? For example, structure, arguments, expression, or conclusion, so everyone can give better suggestions.
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TheRedTelephoneBoothInTheRuins
· 04-17 14:10
Don't be polite, write more and iterate more; the community is there to refine each other.
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RedTelephoneBoothRuins
· 04-17 14:06
This kind of "release first, optimize later" rhythm is very Web3—reach consensus first, then iterate.
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SlippageSkeptic
· 04-17 14:00
Honestly, it's written quite clean and straightforward, no need to be too modest; if you really want to be stronger, read a few more articles on the same topic for comparison.
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ProofOfSnack
· 04-17 13:58
I feel like adding two more examples/data points would make it more convincing, but it's already pretty good now.
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